Ehh
All you did was add a tween for that bulbisaur that was supposed to be a walking cycle and made him fall.(nothing to be exicted about) The reason im giving it such a low rating is because It DOESN even look like you did put effort into this. The arts ok but. SSHHESH....(looks sorta noobish) It doesnt need to be long (a short and sweet story wouldnt hurt) but just add a litttlllee more effort . Cause honestly it looks like something I would do in a mere.... I say 5 minutes..
Renaissancekid